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June 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was really good = ) I loved the ending. Though... it was a bit too fast...
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January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*applause* That was just the right blend of mystery with a twist at the end. Very nice. Although I was kinda wondering why she would let a total stranger do that to her :D
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January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this! The twist at the end is really good. Keep writing.
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very very nice ending. you should definitely make more chapters for this story!
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January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great for a first try :D
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December 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I really liked that. It was hot in the beginning with a cute ending. Somewhat romantic in a way too. Great job.
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December 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very nice and clever. And HOT! I wasn\'t expecting that ending. Great story. ^_^
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December 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That\'s awesome! It would be great with more chapters. Great job!