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December 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Keep up the great work Bane. I like your style!
schedule
December 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
not bad..its pretty good, its a little on the boring side though, add in a fight scene where the woman saves the man or something...nice job
schedule
December 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey Bane, read your text. I think you have a really great style, it isn\'t too hard to read nor too easy. U have a lively imagination and good way to describe things... u could be a great writer, if u wrote other stuff too