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January 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well, I was interested through the entire story and that is a sign of a good story. I fail to see what is R about it, but that's me. There are a lot of things you can do with a creation story, and I liked a lot of what you did. Creating earth from his flesh, that's pretty cool. Hmm. Perhaps that's the R. The details were interesting, such as the description of the man. I think there is a lot you could have added about the creation of humans...mostly, I'm thinking you should add stuff. Yep.