rate_review Reviews

Bring Back Joe, Bring Back Joe, Bring Back Joe,
YOU CUT THIS STORY TO SHORT.......
SALLY I CAN FEEL HER HEART BROKENESS.....THEY HAD SUCH A WONDERFUL LIFE TOGETHER.......
THERE LOVE LIFE WAS FILLED WITH WONDERFUL SEX AND ROMANCE......
PLEASE BRING BACK JOE, BRING BACK JOE!!!!
THEY NEED ONE ANOTHER, AND IN REAL LIFE THEY SHOULD HAVE ONE ANOTHER.

PLEASE I AM CRYING HERE, JUST BRING BACK JOE FOR A FEW MORE CHAPTERS.
GOOD I MUST ALSO SAY YOUR A WONDERFUL WRITTER, THERE IS LOTS OF FEELINGS IN YOUR STORY...

I WOULD LIKE TO RATE IT OVERALL STORY OVERALL A 10
THE SEX IN EACH CHAPTER A 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
THE ROMANCE 9
THE TWIST/CLIFF HANGERS 9
THE SPEED IN WHICH THE STORY WAS POSTED 10+++++++++++
THE FINAL CHAPTER 6, BECAUSE JOE DIED.....SORRY

NOW PLEASE GO BACK AND BRING BACK JOE...........

Wow, what a story. I am sitting here, horny, but on the other hand I am crying after reading your last story. Why did you need to end it, like this? I can\'t stop crying!!
It hurts so much. Joe was such a good fellow. Did any of these events really happen? Very one of your sex sence where very hot and steamy.
But I need to say what a twist to end the last chapter........he dies..........after making Love with her only true Love.WWWWWHHHHHHAAAAAAAWWWWHHHHAAAA.
I bet you where just crying writting the chapter.
You put such emotion into your work......wow.
I can\'t believe a man wrote this, but one did and it\'s AWSOME...........

Please let us know when the next story begin\'s.
I\'ll come back and read your reviews, I hope You\'ll post it here.

Love Ya,
Jen

What can I say this story in just a short time as grew from 1 chapter to 8.
Each Chapter has it hot moments. I hope you keep writting because I love it.
It Hot, Sexy and I want more. Please!!!!!!!!

Sizzle, Hor, Horny, WOW!!!!!What else can I say?
My panies are soaked just by reading your story!!!
IS that it or is there more coming?

Julie

I have personal loved each chapter to this point the sex sences have been HOT, and very SIZZLING........
The last chapter was great how they caught married.

I Love this story, each chapter has awsome sex sense...........and I really like the twisted witch was added when Polly join them in the shower. Each Chapter in
my mind starts of boring and then you read a little more and it get really hard--------at least my cock does, does your cock get hard just writting thes story\'s.
Keep writting we want more, more,more,more,more,more,more,more,more,more,more,more,moree
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GIVE US MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i love these stories, there hot.......very sexy.......are any of this events ture.......

I keep cuming back to this story, as I watch it grow to what it is in just one day. I like to way each chapter has another plot.
The sex in these chapter is very hot. And the way you write it with such passion is wonderful. I know as a woman, it makes me
very hot just reading these 4 chapters. I bet the ladies your wishing you had these events are wishing the same thing.
Are you Joe? Is it your real name? And is Polly and Sally there real names? And do you really live in Kitchener, Ontario.
Because I live there.................What part of town do you live in? Are any of the facts true in these story\'s?
Keep up the great work and bring us more.

This is a very hot story, I like the way, it start off, and leading up to the sexual events, write more please...........write more,
when will round 2 be written.

I love, this is this story, I wish you and I could spent a night with you, with idea\'s like this.......wow, it hot.