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January 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, but 1 question when are you going to get off your ass and finish Chapter 10.
Come on already, I ve been coming back for week to see if it done.
I will love to see you finish it, will there be anymore twist in the story.
I love all the xxx rated scenes to this point. Keep up the great work.
And I would also like to see you get started on your story which you have left so
hanging so so long.
NOW GET WRITTING.
Come on already, I ve been coming back for week to see if it done.
I will love to see you finish it, will there be anymore twist in the story.
I love all the xxx rated scenes to this point. Keep up the great work.
And I would also like to see you get started on your story which you have left so
hanging so so long.
NOW GET WRITTING.
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January 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow what a hot story. I love it. Love the lemons.
Keep up the awsome work.
After reading this story, I am very horny and I need a smoke.....
Hot Stuff.
Keep up the awsome work.
After reading this story, I am very horny and I need a smoke.....
Hot Stuff.
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January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
One very steamy story keep up the great work, can\'t wait til your done chapter 10.......
I was wondering if you would be willing to sleep your script to us here in Hollywood.
I will sent you a personal email over the next several days.
We are really insterest in this story and I hoping we can work out a deal.
This piece of work is very hot and very steamy.
Keep up the great work, Nightwalker or Zehrman, which you ever call your self,
I rate this story a 10
Sex scenes a 10
But please let this guy pull through
Carl
I was wondering if you would be willing to sleep your script to us here in Hollywood.
I will sent you a personal email over the next several days.
We are really insterest in this story and I hoping we can work out a deal.
This piece of work is very hot and very steamy.
Keep up the great work, Nightwalker or Zehrman, which you ever call your self,
I rate this story a 10
Sex scenes a 10
But please let this guy pull through
Carl
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January 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well Happy New Year Everyone, I am slowly working on a New Chapter for this story.
I\'ve posted some of it to this point so enjoy, I will write more as the writter block becaome
less and less.
Anyway once agaappyappy New Year and All the bast in 2004 and happy writting
Zehrsman aka KW Nightwalker
I\'ve posted some of it to this point so enjoy, I will write more as the writter block becaome
less and less.
Anyway once agaappyappy New Year and All the bast in 2004 and happy writting
Zehrsman aka KW Nightwalker
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December 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*lights cig* nice cant wate for the next chap.
Naheta Doe
Naheta Doe
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December 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ok, Nightwalker.Khell does not have anything much to say except what are you doing?
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December 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
To you readers at this time I have decide not to go on with Chapter 10.
It has been removed at this time.
Sorry!!!!!
It has been removed at this time.
Sorry!!!!!
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December 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Please let Joe pull through, so him and Sally can have another wonderful sex scene.
Why have you left us hanging.
Please wrap up this chapter............I am waiting!!!!!
The suspence is killing me..........
You really know ho cat catch the readers attention, don\'t you.....
WOW, what is can I say.........
Why have you left us hanging.
Please wrap up this chapter............I am waiting!!!!!
The suspence is killing me..........
You really know ho cat catch the readers attention, don\'t you.....
WOW, what is can I say.........
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December 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hello everyone.
Thank you for the wonderful reviews to this point. I would like to tell you at this point a new chapter has started.
What will be the new twist, and will Joe pull through?Or will he die? No one really knows I still undecide at this point.
This chapter will take sometime to contunie to create, so please check back.
How ever I will tell you there won\'t be a new installment tonight.
Til next time........
TO BE CONTUNIED>>>>THE SUSPENCE REMAINS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
Thank you for the wonderful reviews to this point. I would like to tell you at this point a new chapter has started.
What will be the new twist, and will Joe pull through?Or will he die? No one really knows I still undecide at this point.
This chapter will take sometime to contunie to create, so please check back.
How ever I will tell you there won\'t be a new installment tonight.
Til next time........
TO BE CONTUNIED>>>>THE SUSPENCE REMAINS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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December 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Why did he have to die for? Him and Sally had a great life together. Oh Please, Bring Back Joe!!!!!!!