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It was vary interesting and made my mind even dirtier lol. I loved it make more :).

Very interesting stories, but long... it has gotten me all fuzzy and horny & romantic in some ways. Sweet !! :).

this was such a good story, i couldnt stop reading, had me wanting to read it all the way to the end. Was sad when he almost died. So erotic, made me tingle in special places. Loved it.

Hey KW,

THIS IS HOT STUFF, thanks FOR SOME TIPS....FOR RPG!!!

YOU ARE KW SAMA

WOLFMAN

WOW, WHAT ELSE CAN I SAY?

KW/ZEHRSMAN SAMA, SAMA, SAMA, SAMA, SAMA, SAMA

HOT STUFF. BUT I WOULD LIKE TO SEE YOU EDIT CHAPTER 12.

I WILL BE RETURNING TO READ ONCE AGAIN.

BILL

Please be advise that I will be editting Chapter 12....In the coming days, I am aware there may be some typing and spelling and grammer mistakes, but that what happen when you write a chapter in a rush and you have the phone ringing off the hook at the time, I just want to get it up for all of you, who did like that I left hanging. Please be patient with me as it WRESTLEMANIA WEEKEND AND that will be taken up my time on now til Tuesday.

Anyway thank you for reading.

I will do a full story edit start sometime in the coming week....

Thanks again for all your support.

KW aka Zehrsman

Ok, Nightwalker I have one gripe about the last chapter...you must check your spelling and grammar. Other than that, the chapters were very good and it\'s good to see that your muse has returned to thrill us all...LOL

Huggles;
Khell

KW,

What a hot story. Man can you write. I bet any women you get into an RPG with you sure give them a run for there money and I bet you sure make them hot in more ways than one. This is ture porn. Well you are a wonderful writter. Keep up the awsome work. I think you are the RPG king and porn King. KWSAMA, KWSAMA.

But did you need to end the chapter like that and leave us all hanging.

WOW.....now I need to find a women to get rid of this sexual build up I have got going on....

GRRR WOLFMAN.......

P>S please finish the next chapter asap

KW aka Zehrsman,

I love what you have written to this point. It filled with tons of compassion and heat. You are a great writter, but I ask you one question why in Chapter 11, did you use a old tv trick.....just as it was getting hot and interesting you left us hanging and hungry for more. And yes I want to read more. I come to this site regularly and I been disappointted for so many months, as you hadn\'t worte anything in such along time. And now I disappointed you write someone to your story and you leave us hanging. Now what\'s up with that?

I agree with many of the other reviews you are SAMA when it comes to writting this type of story.

Keep up the hot and steamy writting.

Oh yes, ha, oh , aaaaaahhhhh your back. And it\'s getting HOTTER......GOD I NEED A SMOKE AND I DON\"T EVEN SMOKE IN THE FIRST PLACE......

Now don\'t disappear this time for so long please.