rate_review Reviews

Oh, that is just so sweet! Don\'t know if that\'s what you were going for, but I loved it. Definitely the best thing I\'ve read in this section so far. You managed to create a lot of tension and build up their personalities well in a small space. And I loved the last line. Go you! I\'m definitely hoping that you\'ll write more! ^_^ Rock on.

Man, I suck at writing.
Sorry for any wasted time. =D