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by ShadowofLight

person Anon
schedule December 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Shocking how hot this story is. I usually don\'t read orginal fanfics, but this one was amazingly hot. I need a freaking sho shower now. Geez! ^_~
person Ashura
schedule December 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT!!!!!! if u don\'t update soon, i will lose my mind! i love your lemons!
person tofu
schedule December 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
all i have to say, is WOW! [blush, blush] that was one of the best damn stories ever! please try to write another chapter. I\'m am soooo... dying to know whats gonna happen next. please, Please, PLEASE! don\'t leave us wanting...
person ZealWarrior
schedule December 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very good story: sexy, sort of dark (subject matter) and quite well described and worded. The characters are well developed as well. Though this isn\'t a complaint, I find it funny how both father and daughter leave such a mess behind every time they have sex. :) The only problem I see is the spelling and some grammer mistakes--but they could easily be fixed. Can\'t wait to read the next chapter(s), but I have no idea where it can go from here, other than the obvious: mother finding out and joining in or Morgan/father/daugther.

Good work!
person TheShadow
schedule December 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Three words WOW
person Cat
schedule December 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was great but I want another chapter where she is a naughty girl and gets and ride on the hershey highway for it.
Hershey highway=asshole
person TradewindVoyager
schedule December 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Not bad. Not bad at all. A few grammatical errors and typos, but not bad.
person The Shadow
schedule December 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
LOL UR STORY MATCHES OMG, I TOTALLY LOVE THAT IDEA A HUSBAND TAKES A YOUNG GIRL!!!!! BUT THIS IS AWESOME TO
person Melrick
schedule November 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love it, very sexy and very naughty! I hope you write more stories along this line.
person Dara
schedule November 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow... This it HOT! Hmm... Anal in the next chapter? Maybe ? Huh... Okay, I gotta go buy new batteries for my...er... remote! Yep, they\'re dead. Gotta go now! Bye!

Darkest Dara