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by ShadowofLight

person yawn
schedule November 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
IT\'S ABOUT TIME YOU UPDATED!!!!!!!! Great chapters. Just read 5 and 6. I hope Monica dies or something though. Or gets raped....Either one is fine.
person Someone
schedule November 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I wanna see what happens! Hurry and update!!!
person Anon
schedule November 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This is actually very nicely written. Made me hott. Please update soon.
person Kirstin
schedule November 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like this kind of Incest Stories. Nice cliffhanger by the way. Maybe the mother can join them? I know i have a dirty mind. But please continue with this steaming father/daughter sex. ;-)
person Tintin
schedule November 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ha, interesting story! XD I love the cliffhanger you have. Mom comes in and catches them at it. Whew... who woulda guessed. Update soon.
person tdg
schedule November 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, it's been a long time since you updated, but you didn't miss a beat. Chapter was spicy.
person viz
schedule October 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Found out by the mother, eh? Heh, heh. Now I wonder what will happen next? *Coughthreewaycough* Anyway, I'm thrilled you updated. It was smoking hot!
person fuzzy
schedule April 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Would you just update already?
person cancan227
schedule March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Mom catches them early in her bed, no in the kitchen on the counter
person anon
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is sooo hot...Please update soon...maybe he could bring some of his friends over to spend the night...give her a good gang bang, but keep Morgan out of it...