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for Forbidden -Done!-

by ShadowofLight

person 4
schedule January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
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person Raven
schedule November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
How hott was this story. It was such a turn on.
person jblk
schedule June 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hot
person theresa
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg!! what a great story! there was smut and suspense! what an amazing combination :D anyway, i really loved this story. very well written, and unlike many other stories around, there was an actual plot in here (trust me when i say that\'s a good thing, at least for me anyway). so yea.... well, i look forward to reading some of your other work. laters!
person lala-land!
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
really enjoyed your story. however, there were a couple of things i didn\'t really like. one: why did you mention that whole \"they didn\'t notice the two knives missing\" thing when she had a gun on her she was gonna use. and two: you also did that \"didn\'t notice the door opening, didn\'t notice the footsteps aproaching\" or whatever thing twice, when once would have done the job. well, besides that, i think your story was good. keep up the good work! :)
person KogasChick
schedule June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
DAMN!!!!! that was fuckin good....nice pregnancy thing.. but if ya have an incest pregnancy, doesnt the baby have problems or something? cuz it happens in animals....but ANYWAYS....THATS FUCKIN KICK ASS!!!!!!!
~*~MuFFiN~*~
person Melissa
schedule May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, i just finished reading your story and i love it, it was a really well written story and i\'m actually sad its the end *sniff*

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person Me
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story! It had a good plot; I\'m glad it didn\'t turn out to be a PWP. The epilogue was nice, too. Keep writing!
person ShadowandFlamePanther
schedule April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hate to see it end but from reading this you know they really love each other and I am glad that they have started their own family. *cries at the ending*
schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow...That was just..wow.. I am glad you waited to update. It was worth it.. I hope you can update soon but no pressures,, Girl you rock.

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