rate_review Reviews

I've read this story a few times now and although I'm completely enamored with it I can't help but feel that you're ending is severely lacking...it was more of a giant cliff hanger that left more questions than answers.would it be possible to continue this wonderful story ^^ and maybe with a happy ending (i do love me happy endings) and that jerk of an older brother needs a good thrashing if I say so he's just a big bully. Please let me know what you decide to do with the story
thanks, :D from a big fan

You write very well. Your descriptions are clean and fluid. Fennick is so sweet not to go farther for ken\'s sake. But please don\'t end it here! Because there really would be \"no closure\"(Haha! Baaaaad pun). I\'m glad your story actually has a PLOT (or seems to)! That is to say that I\'m glad you actually seemed to have crafted a *world* for them to live in along with a religion, different cultures, and a mission and such. I actually want to know what\'s going on with them, not just their sexual exploits, which is GREAT!!! Sorry about the rant. I just really enjoyed this. Thanks for posting! ^_^