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December 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, this is another penname of mine... basically, I use my RA penname for writing and drawing things, MW for things that are rather personal, and SS for these adultish sites. But anyhow... I rated this 3 \'cause to me... *blinks* it doesn\'t give the faintest clue of what\'s going on. Or anything. It\'s kind of a prologue, I guess, but even then... *shrugs* I dunno. I just wasn\'t interested.
The storytelling... well, you tend to use things like \"I slowly boarded the rising plane.\" and use that type over and over. Try inverting the words a bit occasionally to avoid monotonous storytelling. For example, that sentence rephrased is \"Slowly, I boarded the rising plane.\" So... yeah.
And my mom pisses over hands. Oh well.
Anyhoo, continue!
The storytelling... well, you tend to use things like \"I slowly boarded the rising plane.\" and use that type over and over. Try inverting the words a bit occasionally to avoid monotonous storytelling. For example, that sentence rephrased is \"Slowly, I boarded the rising plane.\" So... yeah.
And my mom pisses over hands. Oh well.
Anyhoo, continue!