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December 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This story isativatively brief and not very involved, but it appears that quality has been stressed over quantity. \"Mr. C Gets His Wish\" is quite tightly written, and in fact seems very realistic. This is due in part to the environment for the story - an office, giving the reader the impression that this could happen to him/her.
The \"action\" scene is well done - vividescrescribed but not to the point of being either overly graphic or overly detailed. Just enough information is given as to give clues to the characters\' appearances and positions in the room.
On the downside, the story could\'ve been longer - it is well-written but the reader is left wishing for more - maybe a \"second round\" between Asia and Mr. C. But perhaps that is left to a sequel.
Finally - the reviewer\'s caveat - do not try this stuff at home or at your office! Might get a little hairy... and I don\'t mean your palms!
5/5!
The \"action\" scene is well done - vividescrescribed but not to the point of being either overly graphic or overly detailed. Just enough information is given as to give clues to the characters\' appearances and positions in the room.
On the downside, the story could\'ve been longer - it is well-written but the reader is left wishing for more - maybe a \"second round\" between Asia and Mr. C. But perhaps that is left to a sequel.
Finally - the reviewer\'s caveat - do not try this stuff at home or at your office! Might get a little hairy... and I don\'t mean your palms!
5/5!