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by Yochan

person L© L
schedule September 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OOOoohh!!!! That was so hot PLZ PLZ oh PLz Make some more like this or continue this one. Better yet why not both. Any who thank you so much for your story. Theres simply noy enough nice and hot tent sex out t in in my opinion. So keep up yhe good work and thanks again!
person Si
schedule September 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
what WAS that thing that was doing the guy??? whatever it was, i want it to do me!!! that was some hot sex...i mean...whoa...i am sitting here aching to do something just from reading that...
person Adara
schedule September 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You are v. good at writing sex scenes...the way that creature brought the boy/guy/whatever to orgasm...touching his cock and buttocks with those slimy tentacles...and the way he made the guy almost incoherent...and the way he did the guy's cock and butt and everything else all at once...and how it stuffed its...well, would you call it a cock? let's just say it is one...into the guy and it was all wet and slimy and smelled so good...it got me quite aroused, to tell you the truth. i'm gonna go read more of your stories now...
person Ivy
schedule April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was pretty damn good! I hope you write more stories likere ire in the near future!
person Pudding333
schedule March 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay! A tentacle fic! That comment just now probably had \"pervert\" written all over it, right? Anyways, I love this piece to bits. Not only is it the first original tentacle piece I\'ve encountered, but there are little to no grammar and spelling errors. Awesome work! :)
person Hiryuu
schedule January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was fucking awesome. Tentacle sex rocks. ^_^ Write more tentacle sex! There just isn\'t enough out there, ya know?

Ja!
schedule December 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WHOA NELLY.

That was HOT...and the beginning was a little humorous. Liked the tone in this piece.

And is it me or am I getting a taste for tentacle rape??? XD
person BloodFairy
schedule December 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very imaginative! :)
person Ry
schedule December 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yum. keep writin` ;)
person Ani
schedule November 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is only the 2nd tentacle story I\'ve ever read. I have never understood the attraction until now. I would have liked a little more at the end (What was the purpose of the experiment? Where did the creature come from? What happened to the subject?)

As for the actual intercourse between creature and subject, all I can say is WOW. ^_^