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for So Forbidden

by FlameRain

person Beibhinn
schedule November 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey. I think that this is great. The quantity of smut is just enough and you didn\'t elaborated it to the degree that it got sickening. Your descriptions of Roza and Mr. Barnet were very nicely detailed. Job well done. I think that a second chapter would be a great idea. I\'m looking forward to it.

-Beibhinn-