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I would like to read the second chapter

If I could, I would take this knife and cut the fucking bastard into a hundred pieces. P.S.I'm completly serious

wonderful story i really enjoyed it.

Wow! Very erotic. Very sinful indeed. I often found myself wondering if Roza wanted it to happen on some level or not. I would love to see how this story turns out.

Wow! Very erotic. Very sinful indeed. I often found myself wondering if Roza wanted it to happen on some level or not. I would love to see how this story turns out. I hope you keep writing it.

Awsome story. You really should make another chapter.

Awesome story. Perfect attention to detail. Please keep up the good work?!

This is very well written. The story line is a little scary...but it was very hot! If you write another story i wouldd itd it. :)

This was a first try? Good lord. I\'m in awe. Then again, I didnt go to school, public or private, so there may be more commonly known elements here than I know of. Eh, oh well. *Scratches head* As for second chapter, you have some really good meterial for some potentially grafic or down right horror fic style meterial. On one hand, yer teacher could lose his job, become a stalker, kidnap her and do it all over again, or the other, he could be caught in gene testing of either Roza reporting to a nurse somewhere or the later resulting baby, have a trial covored by the news business, and eventually prison, possible rape of inmates and death. Still another option, He gets out and kills her, after all, if he can have her, why should anyone else? Or hell, she goes insane from the rape and kills him.

Hm. I think its time for dinner.

That was so wrong... but so incredibly hot! very good writing!