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for Roman Enlightenment

by Scribe

person Sue
schedule April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey,

omg, i LOVE your n enn enslavement and enlightment series... this is a great story so far... i\'m really hoping u could finish it... i\'m dying to kno what happens.... could u work on it? please? pretty please with a cherry on top?

Sue

PS. can u email me back if ur gonna finish it?.... THANK YOU SO MUCH!
person Daria
schedule March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like the story and your idea.
person Melantha
schedule February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hehe, very nice! I like it lots. The style is good, and everything is so real. I love the way the story moves along, though maybe you should put the translations at beginning and end?

~melantha
person Sarah
schedule February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is getting better and better,please post more soon.
person Morgania
schedule February 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*gasp shock HR!* R!* You cant stop now! WHERES THE OTHER CHAPTER?! *cries* Its a cliff hanger! Damn! First of all, I love you for writing this story. You are amazing and deserve a hug! *hugs* Secondly, I usually dont act this ...\'happy\' unless something amazing occurs, i.e.=Jesus coming down for my birthday and buying me a tee-shirt from Hot Topic. Man, that would be great. ;) Finally, YOU MUST POST! ITS KILLING ME! Really! Look, I\'m dying! And if I die before I finish this story then thats so not good because i will be DOOMED TO HAUNT THE AFF SITE FOREVEEEEEEEEEER! ...just kidding? but really, you are truly amazing. keep up the work!
person Giggles
schedule January 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*Does a happy dance then stops to hug you and cover you with kisses of gratitude* I\'m really glad to see that you\'ve updated this story I was afraid that you had forgotten about it. Well, keep the good work up you\'ve done a good job with updateing all your stories. Hopes to hear more from you and really hopes to see this story and Child of the Night updated soon.

Lots of Luv
Giggles
person neela
schedule January 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More, more, more!!!! I thoroughly enjoyed the prequel to this story and am waiting eagerly for more of this.

Lupus in the modern world...what could open his eyes to what his beloved had to deal with more than this?
person Anon
schedule January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
please write more of this one! your doing so well! I would love to see more of the mountain man story too! Love the web site! :)
person Nikki
schedule January 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love this story. i read the other one before this one, Roman Enslavement. i love the ending and the story. i just finishing reading it about an hour agd jud just start to read this other ending to the story. i love this ending too. i know you are not finsh with it but please write more. this story is so good, keep me coming back. Hope you hip gets better.
person Sarah
schedule December 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad you deside to write the sequel,you are very talented and I can\'t wait to read more of your work,post more soon please.