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for Roman Enlightenment

by Scribe

person Lea
schedule October 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Update, Update, Update!!! Please! This is a great story, I like this alternate ending much more then the first one [although the first was good also :-)] I've noticed that you haven't updated in a while. I hope you haven't stopped working on it. It's really great, and you're a superb writer....and one last time....UPDATE!!!
person fmuder
schedule September 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You haven't updated on AFF yet, but I'll review anyway. A bit short, but still a nice little chapter. It'd be cool to see more of Lupus' reaction to modern society. Keep it up!
person lalalala
schedule August 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey,
I really wanna know what happens in this, so could u please continue writing it? I kinda like the whole him being reliant on her now, but make sure it doesn't come to a point where he gets clingy. lol

So yeah, please keep writing :D

person rain
schedule August 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please write more, I love this story! Been checking in all summer hoping you'd added another chapter!
person fmuder
schedule August 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for another lovely chapter, I've been waiting. The two should just get it on already :)
person map
schedule July 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see you up again. I\'m looking forward to what\'s going to happen next. Your stories are very well written and thought out.
person Anna
schedule June 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Once again another great chapter! Looks like Lupus is starting to put a little dint in Mozell\'s wall. I really hope that he wins her and she lets him. I really hope this story has a happy ending. I am really looking forward to reading the next chapter! Keep up the excellent work and please up date as soon as you can!!!
person karisma
schedule June 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ooooh, very nice! And why does it seem that Lupus is having less trouble adapting than poor Mozelle did? (Of course, he\'s not a e.) e.) I can\'t wait to see what he\'s going to do to \'prove\' it to her...
person map
schedule May 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just wondering if this fic was dead. I noticed there hasn\'t been an update since January (almost six months). I was very interested in the story but if it\'s history I won\'t keep chng fng for updates.
person BrownEyedGirl
schedule April 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey scribe, gr8 series so far. I really like the whole alternate thread of time thing. But please please update soon, Im dying here!