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Please update me!!!

Nice story, I just spent the last two hours reading this one and the one before it. A few things (anachronism: Roman boys had their coming-of-age ceremony when they were like thirteen.) Secondly, for just about every latin phrase in both stories, the verbs were incorrectly conjugated and the nouns incorrectly declined. :p Only complaining since I took three years of Latin, otherwise I\'d have no place in saying anything.

I especially liked how you protrayed the deities, which kind of modeled the poetry of the Greeks, and later, the Romans. Another thing, I believe the Romans had a much more liberal view of slaves than protrayed in your story, but who cares, it\'s still great. Also, enslavers who went around looking for slaves to capture didn\'t come about until the later years of the Roman Empire, which proses a question, when is your story set?

In Memoriam Mitto.

i love it! stinkpot, stinkerbelle, you should name thier childeren; stinkpan and stinkerella

*does a happy jig* Yay, you updated this one! I really like the story line, the romance, and the characters are great. Your characterizations are excellent. Its almost problematic, I have trouble deciding which story I hope you\'ll update next! Argh, my brain! Please write more *puppy dog eyes*

omg this one is great as well (i just read Roa=man Enslavement) ... please update soon ... !!! ^_______^

This is a really good story! Please update soon, and when you do, can you please email me? I really like this story and would like to be able to keep track of it.
Thanks

--Meep

evilhamster213@earthlink.net

Oh yes. This is going really well. It\'s such a good story. I like it. Lupus is so.... I *like* him. excellent storyline. Hmm... would he be able to get a jobv of some sort? Uneducated, hm. Well well. ;)
I\'d love to read more.

you know what would be funny? if mozelle ended up pregnant, just because condoms don\'t work all the time now so its weird thinking they would work even better back then, well it would be funny for me and dischordia, i was also wondering, does mozelle even like lupus, at all? great story keep it coming

You have brought me to the point of begging.

PLEASE pleasepleasepleaseplease update soooooon!!!!

Thank you, that is all.

plzz finish this story! i lurv the scribe stories, i think i've read most of them. Clive is one of my fav characters (i know he's not in this story, but anyway) and i like trenton too! just wanted you to know!