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Are you going to write anymore?

great story. i can't wait until you finish it.

Update...NOW!!! I want to see what happens, I must see what happens. YOU CAN'T DO THIS TO ME!!! YOU CAN'T WRITE SOMETHING SO GOOD AND THEN LEAVE IT!!!!

I wish you would update, I know you are probably busy but I, miss this story so much.

Lupus loves Mozelle...yay!
Are the 'gods' going to do any more interferring?...Will they live happily ever after?...Will you be adding another chapter?..lol
Loved poor Lupus's reaction to our world...especially the car ride...and the thing with the toilet paper...so the right thing to do, swish it all over the floor...How many of us have been tempted to do that?...lol..

I am glad you decided to continue this story. I felt the first story ended to soon. This continued version is going good. One thing and I might of missed this, I know Lupus is 21, but how old is Mozelle? At one point Lupus says to Mozelle brother that he's not to young for her. And Mozelle brother is 15 years younger than her, did I get that right? If her brother is about the same age has Lupus and she is 15 years older, than that put her in her mid thirties. And up til recently she was a virgin. Is any of this right or are my numbers wrong? Anyway, story is going good and I look forword to the next chapter.

OHMIGODOHMIGOD! I think I am hyperventilating, I am so happy that you updated. I loved this chapter, it is so great. I really hope you are feeling better and lets see some more romance with Mozelle and Lupus.

I really like this story and the one that came before this. They're very well written, I can't wait until the next chapter is up.

*yells from under all the other stories Scribe is working on* HEY, THIS STORY IS GREAT!!! *adopts a voice like a male make-up artist/hairdresser* BUT IS IT DESPERATLY IN NEED OF AN UPDATE, GIRL!! *lowers tone and with slightly scratchy voice* Hopefully I have you attention now, so update. I\'m watching your personal site and AFF so go for either...I wonder if Lupus is going to be dragged into the world of football...eck...*mental picture of Lupus in tight football pants playing with other cute guys in tight football pants*...well, maybe is won\'t be too bad....

plz upload more you can leave it there
i need to know what happens plz plz plz
write more update more
love liljo xxxxxx