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for dad?

by penguy101

person who cares
schedule March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
fucking homophobe(the dad)
person Yue
schedule October 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was sooo sad!!!! I will admit, there were many spelling errors, although I don\'t mind, some things weren\'t described as well as they could and I think you could have made this story longer and better, but I liked it nonethelesHIS HIS IS NOT A FLAME!!!! Ok? chu~ -Yue