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by ValondraPhoenix

person Dreamer22
schedule October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hot. very well done, I love it
person Maja Valondra Wolf
schedule June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was a one-shot fic, Chris. Sorry to disappoint.
person chris
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i have to say it has alot of potiential (sry can\'t spell). i\'ll give u a little tip though, always leave a cilffhanger, keeps them comeing back for more, n getting a lil frustrated along the way. keep up the great work, n let me know the next time u finish a new chapter, i\'d love to read & review.

later,
chris
person Cameron
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is an amazing story and i love it.
person gothic miss
schedule March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
not bad at all, quite nice plot, wouldnt mind some more of it. Nicely done