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ARG!!!!!!!!!!!!! *throws confetti at you* I'm not normally a chapter-fic type person..... But damnit you sucked me in! *threatens you with a hair brush* You better get it in gear and write! *grins* Don't MAKE ME chain you to your seat and stnad over you with a whip and force you to write. *blinks down at her very thin red-haired sand and grins sheepishly* Okay so I'm probably not big enough to fight you over it but damnit..... I WANT MORE! *whines* *sudden thought* Oh, and I don't like the idea of Trevor and Luke together, I just don't. It makes me cringe. It's your story I'm just letting you know it makes me wanna scream NO at the computer screen every time you mention it. Luke wouldn't make Trevor happy. He just wouldn't. Seems to me he might actually be sort of abusive towards him really..... *cough* Okay, enough of that, LATER! -Karie Chaos =^.^= *Mew!*

When are you gonna update again? I'm on the edge of my seat! Will they get caught at the park? Maybe the nephew will walk in on them? O.o Now that would be interesting. Well, please post again. Thanx!

Awesome, awesome, awesome story. I'm so seriously in love with Trevor. At first I thought this was going to be some melodramatic, angsty, depressive, stupid goth story. Not that I wouldn't read it if it was, but that gets tiring. Trevor is a very whimsical (I can't believe I just said that) character, who while a bit of a slut, would gladly fall in love with someone. It's endearing, while definitely not one-dimensional. Then Daniel (one of my all time favorite male names) is simply the gruff, almost uber seme type. Like a grumpy teddybear, if you will. In other words, I adore the combination. Then there's Luke. Oh, sexy. I love him, I just dislike him getting close to Trevor. Can you blame me? Daniel/Trevor is too hot to mess ulus,lus, anybody who thinks school uniforms are sexy, is the best kind of person in my book. And I don't see Luke as a badguy per say. Just somebody that wants the they want, and will undoubtably get it (though hopefully not with Trevor). It is very wrong, I can see Luke hitting on Nate... very very wrong. But I'm into weird pairings like that. I'm not sure what I'm reviewing about at this point, but just go with me here. Not only do you have those striking main characters, but your minor characters are just as amazing. When you heard about Daniel's past with his family, I didn't skip over it out of boredom. The way you wrote it, made even the trips into backstory good, and definitely reading worthy. I love Nate (which probably spawned the Luke/Nate pairing), even if he just was introduced. He should definitely stick around in the story. At first, again, you think one thing about this kid, he's some GBA druggie from what you've heard and such... then you realize how his father has effected him. Speaking of his father, that man needs to die. Many times over. Yes, back to Nate. He should stay in the story somehow! I know I've just described how I feel about the characters, but that's my reaction on this. I can't stop going 'Aw, that's so cute' or 'That's so sad! GRR!' and connecting with what your writing. For style, it's amazing, though I was a bit confused at the first chapter. Probably because it was Present, and the rest our our story is Past. Either way, the writing and style is excellent throughout. What I really mean to say, is please please please, keep up this story. After reading so many original stuff, where the author either gives up after a bit, or the plot simply disinterests me... your work is not only a breathe of fresh air, it's a revolution.

P.S. If you need any help about figuring out killers, I'm into psychopathic stuff. *shifty eyes* Yeah..

P.P.S. If you ever want to run an idea past someone... look no further! Email me, or AIM me at Nelo Anjello

P.P.P.S. The sex is incredibly hot. And the uniform kink.. .. Yes, I seriously melted.

P.P.P.P.S. Um, I'm done now. Sorry for the really long and pointless review. ^^;

Yay, you updated I am so happy I could dance. The water fight was funny as all, and to think that Dan and Trevor are getting even closer. *sigh the happy to be in love sigh as a little birdy sings in the background* I love this story and remember back when I had to wait many many many ( is the guilt setting in yet) many months for an upadate. But it was always worth it. Thank you so so much.

I haven\'t read all of it yet, but this story is awesome so far!!!

It took me a while to read it, but I was so happy when I saw you story updated!!! I LOVE how their relationship is progressing. I don\'t want the other teenager from hell to ruin their love!!! XD Ohhh! Can\'t wait to see Dan getting caught!

Awesome fic, can\'t wait till the next part.

Yet another great update...deserves more cookies I think. :: whips out the coolie platter :: hehe. Anyway. I think you\'re right about the nickname thing and I can totally see Luke being an ass like that :: giggles :: Can\'t wait for morum..um...I think that about wraps it up for this review...sad they\'re sometimes longer. Till next time...

::sigh:: I wish I had an older man to have water-fights with in his apartment ::sigh:: -mind you I\'m a girl, and I really want him for the same reasons as Trevor ::wink wink:: -Anyway, yea, the frostbite was a false alarm, haha. I\'m alive and well, which could be unfortunate since Wisconsin weather always sucks. It\'s either deathly cold, or deathly hot... Anyway, I loved the chapters :) ::Glee:: I was so excited!!!!! -I still want a peek at the nephew, hahahaha...then again, that\'s the sick, twisted sort of person I am...

~ThePQ4

::sigh:: I wish I had an older man to have water-fights with in his apartment ::sigh:: -mind you I\'m a girl, and I really want him for the same reasons as Trevor ::wink wink:: -Anyway, yea, the frostbite was a false alarm, haha. I\'m alive and well, which could be unfortunate since Wisconsin weather always sucks. It\'s either deathly cold, or deathly hot... Anyway, I loved the chapters :) ::Glee:: I was so excited!!!!! -I still want a peek at the nephew, hahahaha...then again, that\'s the sick, twisted sort of person I am...

~ThePQ4