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i found this on here a while ago and thought it was amazing then, i'm really glad you carried on with it! please update soon, i love the characters and plot!

Just last night I was thinking that there was no good slash out there to read anymore for me 'cause I'd somehow managed to read all of it. As well as a lot of the trash just because when you need a slash fix you need a slash fix! It becomes a great desperation just to read *anything* about two guys getting it on. And man, is some of it bad. But last night despite being very desperate I wouldn't settle for anything less than decent. So I checked out aff.net, doubting I'd find anything of any quality. And then I stumbled upon this little gem. Reading it lost me several hours of sleep, but I certainly thoroughly enjoyed myself!!! Great piece of work, excellent and interesting characterisation, enjoyable story line and suspense. I'm really looking forward to more and hoping it won't be too long 'cause then I'll be forced to read one of the bad fics :(

Ugh work sucks...especially school work eww. Anyway, I can't wait for you to update this, I'm so happy that you finally did! And I personally love Luke, so it's all good, but I wonder how this love triangle is gonna work out with Him and Trevviekins ::snickers:: and Dan...hmmm...anyway. Keep up the good work~!! Cheers.

The chapter was great! It didn't have Luke in it! Lol! Ok. I'll give the guy a chance. But even then, I'm still cheering for Dan and Trevor! Luke is the dark - Lucius Malfoy - type. But Dan is the right guy for Trevor. Plus, they DO have some amazing chemistry! Ohh! And Dan admitted his love for Trevor!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Now I feel more threatened by Luke than before! LOL! *cheers for Dan*

I think you've pulled out Dan and his partner's conversation really well. I'm relieved! Dan's partner isn't a jerk!! Wheeee! ^_^

I won't push you for updates. I know how life goes... My life has been chaotic. But I hope to read more of it soon! This is one of my fav stories!

You Updated!!! I'm so excited! I have to read now more.....Nail...Polsih..lu.... :: War faints with excitement ::

Hour and a half later:

Okay I'm sorry about that. I don't know if maybe I had too much sugar today or what but that came out of no where. Since I've had my nap now let me tell you how wonderful you are to have updated. I check religously for this story because you have captured what a real romance really is. Its fast, chaotic and you never see it coming and you have taken this magical act of God and translated it to paper (so to speak). Which I think you ought to do BTW. I can apperecaite how life gets in the wf whf what people are really suppose to do with there lives however, that is no excuse to let your reads go this long with out an update. Sleep is not important, school is inconsiquetial and let the bills pile high. Your readers need you, let the physical world be damned. Again, I'm sorry. I blaim it solely on the sugar. Update when you can I'm devoted to your writing I'll wait faithfully and if you take too long I'll send you an annoying e-mail wmuchmuch affection of course. Till your next eagerly anticipated chapter. ((^^))

UPDATED!! I'd given up. I hope your life gets a little less stressful so you can have more time to write- remember writings carthetic (spelling?). Ands yes, I am just buttering you up to write more chapters, but still.... more please.

... hehe...
think i've scared you...
sorry~...
hehe...
any how~!
BEAR HUG...!!
hehe... work hard...
dunn stress out ...
me also quite alot on...
O levels... and all the other craps...
harhar...
hopefully your load lessen soon~!
till then~!

Yaykins!! I started a mini-trend... I updated one of my friends' fave fics last night around 11:00 PM, bwahaha. Imagine my joy at seeing your story just one click ahead of mine... ::glee:: -anyway, Yes, I survived the summer...bearly. Terribly boring... I read a lot -unfortunatly, my local library is very 'homely' and doesn't carry anything smuttier then a Norah Roberts Book... ;:sigh:: -anyway, I loved the chapter -and the reason that everyone wanhe phe peek at Nate is that he shows so much darn potential as a sex fiend -hehehehe... no, just kidding, but he does show serious potentical for some smut :) That's just the minor-fetish-ish-thing in me though... ;:shrug::

Hope your semester gets easier!! I know the new school year for me is a pain in the arse, but whatever gets me otta high school!!

~ThePQ

Another excellent chapter, my friend. Keep writing!

Holy fucking crap. That was really, really good. I'm not used to talent, so coming across it so undiluted was a wonderful shock.
You made my day. I don't know how I'll he the this not being finished. If you don't update soon I think I'll cry.
I love the boys. Excuse me, the boy and the man. And I like Luke. He's a sweetie. Well, I kind of like him. A little.
And speaking as a homosexual of a different flavour, you sure did catch the angst right.
I really like the detective's family, and how you went into his background. Now I'm all worried for that sister.
God, that was good. It had to be fattening. It was orgasmic. I d hav have any niks, ks, I just want more.