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February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
whoohoo! new chaps -lol- i didn\'t check back before you had this one up ^_^ anyway i like the domesticism very cute -grins- very good two chaps, can\'t wait for more ~Leaf~
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February 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I\'ve been reading for a while now, just haven\'t reviewed yet, sorry. ANyway, there should definitely be a Luke scene...i like him he seems cool. I can\'t wait to see what you\'re going to do with the nephew!! anyway, update update update!!
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February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Can\'t wait for an update! :)
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February 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the best stories I\'ve read–more proof that good stuff *can* come out of aff.net! I like Luke, i can visualize him perfectly, but I like the relathip hip between Dan and Trevor too. this is probably not the way he is, but i keep visualizing Dan as a middle-aged guy with a pot belly...I\'m stupid, ignore me. :-)
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February 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG this story is great i really love it. Please update ASAP!!!...just a little request you dont have to do it if you dont want but here it is...Trevor and Dan always do it \"doggie\" style for lack of a better word what about a really intamate face to face secne...like maybe their last time together or somethingont ont know sti still good the way it is but i feel bad for trevor face always smashed into something. ok well im done GREAT STORY!
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February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow...you sure have a lot of review ;-)
Way to go chickie!
Way to go chickie!
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February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
No, I don\'t like Luke at all. Dan is the one for Trevor. DAN!!! *waves Dan\'s flags*. Thank you for letting me know about the update! I hope to hear from you again. Your story still rocks, even if I don\'t like where it is going... because I don\'t like Luke...because I want Dan to be with Trevor... Oh, and the domestiene?ene? AWW!!!
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January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is completely excellent. Your style is both very comfortable and very poetic. You really know how to paint a picture with your words while still making it a very comfortable and easy read. I\'m loving the storyline. I have a vague idea of where you\'re going, so I\'m anxious to see how wrong I am. ~_^ Looking forward to more.
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January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, another revolutionary chapter. I love the story, keep up the awesome writing. Waiting with bated breath for the next chapter!
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January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just had to say this is fantastic! I\'ll join the ranks shouting \"more! more!\" Well written, great characters, great sex, very \"real\" if you get my meaning. I adore Trevor and Dan, not sure about Luke, hate to think he would come between them..no pun intended...lol Makes me want to write again, if only I had the time...isn\'t RL a bitch?? Keep it up, you are fantastic!! Cimorene